My Happy Place.
WALT: Create a Poem based on your happy place.
For this activity we had to make a poem based on our happy place. I am pretty happy about how my poem turned out and I really enjoyed creating my poem.
Kia ora Nova, This is a clever rhyming poem with interesting use of language. The bold heading and large attractive font is an effective format and makes it easy to read.
This is a really great poem that you have written, I loved reading it. It reminds me of when you read a book and the story takes to to a place in your mind that only you can see! I can imagine this is how you are when you are reading a book without pictures! Have you been doing lots of reading during your time at home? What have you read? It is a great time to be putting in some extra reading for Kids Lit training. The competition is still on but not til September. Think how many more books we can all read by then!!
Hello Nova, Hi my name is Sione and I attend St Pius x catholic school.I really like your writing about your special place.Next time can you put in some pictures.Besides that keep up the good work.
Hi Nova.
ReplyDeleteWhat a magical and mysterious place indeed. I would love to be able to see even one of these worlds that are squished up inside of you.
Maybe you choose just one of them and describe just a moment of time in this magical and mysterious world of yours.
Tineka
Kia ora Nova, This is a clever rhyming poem with interesting use of language. The bold heading and large attractive font is an effective format and makes it easy to read.
ReplyDeleteHi Nova
ReplyDeleteThis is a really great poem that you have written, I loved reading it. It reminds me of when you read a book and the story takes to to a place in your mind that only you can see!
I can imagine this is how you are when you are reading a book without pictures!
Have you been doing lots of reading during your time at home? What have you read?
It is a great time to be putting in some extra reading for Kids Lit training. The competition is still on but not til September. Think how many more books we can all read by then!!
Keep up the great work Nova
Talk again soon
Mrs Costello :)
Hello Nova,
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Sione and I attend St Pius x catholic school.I really like your writing about your special place.Next time can you put in some pictures.Besides that keep up the good work.
Best wishes.